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Not too bad of a story, but it kind of got lost in the minutia of details of the song artists, wedding and other trivial.
Nice little story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Loved the respect shown to Patsy, Dolly, and Wille. 5 stars based on pure enjoyment. Thanks for sharing it.
Great story! Thanks for taking the time to write. Thorough enjoy your works. You need not apologize about a few misspellings. Trivial in light of the time you freely give to entertain us. You're one of the best on this site! Thanks again for sharing.
G
Just read in the county news that the song 'Crazy' is in the #4 spot of all time country songs. Dolly Parton's song ''Jolene' is the number one song in country music. Sorry about the misspelled words. It was a fun story to write.
DG Hear
Good story do not worry about the editing most people will not notice. Crazy was written by Wille Nelson and Patsy Kline's version of the song put him on his way.
Couple of things: "Dolly Pardon?" "Pre-nupt?" "Nervous wreak?" Jesus Christ, try editing.
Thank you DG.. I spent more then a few minutes listening to Patsy on youtube while reading the story. I may have even saved a few to my laptop. I absolutely love Patsy Cline's voice and The Jordanaires background. Really good story TYA 5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
I enjoyed this story a lot, despite misspellings (e g., Dolly Parton / Pardon, nervous wreck / wreak) and the unlikely story of Sylvia being unable to match jersey 67 with player's name. The program sold at the game would have that info and a large number of ppeople at her school would have that information (announcers, coaches, players). Despite these flaws, 5 stars.
It was a sweet, gentle story…with lots of detail about the development of their relationship and marriage. There were errors throughout that could have been avoided (Parton / Pardon, complement / compliment, than / then), but the writing was good…as one would expect from this accomplished author.