by bob54z
loving this story and have been wondering why bob doesn't just change human bodies so that the women don't ovulate as often that would cut down on births and population growth. he could also put into practice population controls so there are only allowed to be so many births a year maybe a quarter of all deaths so the population would gradually decrease over several decades until it's sustainable. I also think instead of leaving earth to the worst of the worst that he should just eliminate them altogether and then after moving the people to the new planet the ones left on earth could have a new beginning bob could put earth back the way it should be just keeping smaller settlements or turning giant cities into smaller cities eliminating urban sprawl. wish this could actually happen in real life it would make life so much better.
It’s an intriguing story has a plot that makes me want to know what happens next. Bob seems to screw every girl the exact same way. They all go to same beach and eat the same kind of food every day. At times I thought you copied scenes and just changed girl’s names out. It’s fun story when he mess with world leaders and can get hot. Just change things up a bit. Got whole new planet and can teleport. Go to rain forest for picnic. To to mountains for hike or ski trip. Just chmage the sites up from beach seafood or bbq. Thanks for writing
Great plot flow and very good character development with Caitlin. I like the direction this is going and am starting chapter 8 tonight.
Keep them coming Bob, and don't listen to douchebags that have nothing but negative things to say.
does that mean when you turn 50-60 you're gonna retreat from life and quit being productive? This author has written a wonderful story that spurs the imagination. Many of us wish we could do the same. You have some gall demeaning his effort, you spineless cocksucker.
I say this because the guy is over 50 or 60 years old. I doubt that he will be able to finish.
I titled my comment what a waste because it's been a long time since the last chapter has been posted. At this rate it makes me think it won't be finished.
All I care about is getting more. A MASTERPIECE is this series.
You really blew me away with this chapter. You are coming up with ways to address situations that are actually needing to be addressed in the real world. Your addition of Cailin was a stroke of genius. The way you are finally getting more of the story line moving forward with the earth is great. I look forward to the next chapter please keep up the good work.
Will you be writing any more of this one? I really loved reading this one and hope to see more of it soon Thank You