by DanDraper
Very good story. I'm glad she got away from him at the end, she could do so much better. 5stars.
Your story revolved around a theme I don't recall ever reading. As another comment noted; It was a fun read with a satisfying end. Just wish that when she looked back at the motel she saw the cop cars pulling up for Owen :-)
@yukonnights I thought about that ending also, but decided to keep the ending open for the readers to think what might happen to the characters afterwards.