All Comments on 'Criminal Behavior'

by DanDraper

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rutherford366rutherford366over 2 years ago

Very good story. I'm glad she got away from him at the end, she could do so much better. 5stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nobody seemed innocent here but it was a very fun and sexy story. 5 stars.

yukonnightsyukonnightsover 2 years ago

Your story revolved around a theme I don't recall ever reading. As another comment noted; It was a fun read with a satisfying end. Just wish that when she looked back at the motel she saw the cop cars pulling up for Owen :-)

DanDraperDanDraperover 2 years agoAuthor

@yukonnights I thought about that ending also, but decided to keep the ending open for the readers to think what might happen to the characters afterwards.

Anton79Anton793 months ago

Bad Boys! Bad Boys! Whatcha gonna do?

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