All Comments on 'Crimson Moon'

Nice! I think I'll use some of these techniques in my next session. Thanks for the inspo!

Sounds like you have an fun and interesting time ahead :) Thanks for commenting!

Simply amazing!!

It would be a crime not to continue.

Thanks I have some ideas, but writing a story takes time :)

Very well written! I love the humour woven with the VERY hot story.

Now I have to go read all your other ones. 😏

One of my favorite stories on Litererotica. I hope it will be continued. it is very well written and thought out.

One of my favorite stories. a very good read.I hope it will be continued.I love the character detail.

CAN I WAIT FOR WHATS NEXT NO I WANT IT NOW!!!!

He left in a daze and wandered around until he found what he wanted. He went into the shop and found the perfect gun, showed his license and bought ten boxes of shells.

He quickly loaded the Benelli and checked it. He slung it so that it hung beneath his coat and walked back to the subway and headed home.

First things first he thought with a smile.

Good premise.

Too much pain for my taste, though.

Needed more involvement of her body parts. Her breasts. Her ass. Her pussy.

An editor/proofreader would help.

You wtote: "With a sharp 'clack' her metal heals came to a rest on either side of my head." HEELS, not HEALS.

You wrote: "I focussed on the pain." FOCUSED, with one "S" not two.

Three stars.