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oneagainst almost 2 years agoAuthor

A bit of fun. This piece is referring to https://literotica.com/s/the-devil-and-the-sea-ch-01

ender2k2k almost 2 years ago

That was interesting. And now I am waiting for the next story. Thanks

Chopinesque about 1 year ago

I like what you did here.

djrip 9 months ago

OMG. I can't breathe.

Poor Lily. She's got moxie, at least.

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At last we begin, and from the smallest of things: a mistake. Cassie asked for the free will to make her own choice at the end of Wonderland, but she did something unexpected. Instead of keeping free will for herself, she gave it to her nemesis, Lily. Now Lily is free to wand...

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