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SamYorkSamYork5 months ago

I'll keep an eye out.

RoissyAngelRoissyAngel5 months ago

I am watching 'Thunder Bay' on the TV. Joanne Dru has just spent 75 minutes being a complete bitch to James Stewart. Then he got all dominant and she melted into a submissive pile in his arms. Reminds me of someone. Methinks Lily does protest too much. I think it would be more appropriate justice though if she ends up at the feet of a woman rather than a man.

joy_of_cookingjoy_of_cooking5 months ago

This is the best kind of author insert fic. Please write lots and lots of stories about Lily wandering through other people's stories raising hell.

oneagainstoneagainst5 months agoAuthor

@joy_of_cooking who knows where she turns up next? Maybe a Chinese restaurant with a vampire...?

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At last we begin, and from the smallest of things: a mistake. Cassie asked for the free will to make her own choice at the end of Wonderland, but she did something unexpected. Instead of keeping free will for herself, she gave it to her nemesis, Lily. Now Lily is free to wand...

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