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King_MacAulayKing_MacAulayabout 2 years ago

Well I liked the other story. Sorry that it's getting 1 bombed though :/

TheRedChamberTheRedChamberabout 2 years ago

It would feel wrong giving this anything other than five stars.

oneagainstoneagainstabout 2 years agoAuthor

In response to https://www.literotica.com/s/influencers-no-such-thing-as-free

Lifestyle66Lifestyle66about 2 years ago

It was an OK story, but didn't quite get there. I liked the over all concept. But I think it needs more revisions.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Trying to be clever - you failed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Writing this, even though u did place it In satire just kinda feels like you're incapable of handling negative criticism. An author cannot control how people will respond to their work, what you invisioned for your story and how others perceive it will never match up. Just take thing with a grain of salt and move on.

AlinaXAlinaXabout 1 year ago

I'm happy to see I'm not the only one writing these. They're great fun.

oneagainstoneagainstabout 1 year agoAuthor

Yeah! Which were yours? I had a quick look....

AlinaXAlinaXabout 1 year ago

Collected in my "750 in the metacafe" series.

sammy_808sammy_808about 1 year ago

this was a wonderful quick read. :D

ChopinesqueChopinesqueabout 1 year ago

Witty as can be. Like a lot.

maninconnmaninconn8 months ago

Clever! Thanks for writing.

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