All Comments on 'Crone Ch. 01: Healer and Lass'

EM here. I found this in a folder, wrote it a year or two ago. A little clumsy; a little slow. But I kind of like the scene setting, the day-in-a-life pacing.

And the lovely impudent pushy lass! Have to show her to somebody. So here it is!

What do you think?

Loved it. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Well-written with interesting characters and a plot. The dialogue was well done and the farm boy was a determined and creative worker. The pool scene was rather strange but fun to read. The story is set for the future and I expect it will be as good as the first.

I like it! Well written and easy to read. Interesting characters with numerous possible plot hooks.