All Comments on 'Cross Country Bus Trip Pt. 03'

People make it more complicated than it needs to be. They have cell phones, Skype, texting, and can save up for weekends together in each other's towns. The only thing that wouldn't make sense is if they didn't even try. Giving up is just stupid and tells people that you weren't serious to begin with.

And I hope for more. Meant to give a five, but the phone slipped and I hit "1" by mistake. Sorry about that

I realize this was meant for the bus trip, but this can't be the end. There needs to be at least one more where they meet a little while later. Still a good story, and I will say a 4 star story for me. I think you are a good writer and hopefully you will continue it from here. It would be fun to see kyle show up at the restaurant looking for a job or his man.

more please this is a touching story please write more

I appreciate the compliments. This story isn't done and the sequel is in progress. It might be a week or so before its complete. It'll be more of the same. But a few twists. Glad you enjoyed. I appreciate you reading.

-EF

This is a great story, true love. Makes me wonder if they ever got back together, guess I’ll never know. 🙁