All Comments on 'Cross Country Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Outstanding story.

I don't know how but this story keeps getting better with each chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Worth the wait.....

I checked every day until Ch4 showed up. Now I'm looking forward for the next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Waiting Anxiously

Great story development and deserves more very soon.

reader230reader230over 14 years ago
Nice!

Look forward to reading more! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
More, please!

You must continue. I love how a story continues to build and heads in different directions. It keeps everything interesting

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
One of the bests

Hurry up ! It's too bad to live us without knowing what's coming next !!

Comentarista82Comentarista82about 8 years ago
Hottest installment yet

I've enjoyed your other ones, but this one had the hottest buildup to Sasha taking Sebastian and Sasha getting Nicky aroused. You worked a lot of detail into Sasha weakening him and I loved her stripping and changing in front of him, then seducing him in bed. Nicely done. :)

AncientKarmaAncientKarmaabout 8 years ago
Damn.....

This chapter was definitely the hottest one yet. I can't wait to see how you top this one.

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