All Comments on 'Cross Country Ch. 04'

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AncientKarmaAncientKarmaabout 8 years ago
Damn.....

This chapter was definitely the hottest one yet. I can't wait to see how you top this one.

Comentarista82Comentarista82about 8 years ago
Hottest installment yet

I've enjoyed your other ones, but this one had the hottest buildup to Sasha taking Sebastian and Sasha getting Nicky aroused. You worked a lot of detail into Sasha weakening him and I loved her stripping and changing in front of him, then seducing him in bed. Nicely done. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
One of the bests

Hurry up ! It's too bad to live us without knowing what's coming next !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
More, please!

You must continue. I love how a story continues to build and heads in different directions. It keeps everything interesting

reader230reader230over 14 years ago
Nice!

Look forward to reading more! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Waiting Anxiously

Great story development and deserves more very soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Worth the wait.....

I checked every day until Ch4 showed up. Now I'm looking forward for the next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Outstanding story.

I don't know how but this story keeps getting better with each chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

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