All Comments on 'Crossing of Worlds Pt. 01 Ch. 01'

Disjointed. Hope the next chapter has what was missing from this one.

Yes my apologies, I forgot to include in the author's note that not all segments of the book will be available here. The prologue being one of those left out.

Chapter 2 however, will make references to events from the prologue that will shed more light on Alex's predicament.

I'm currently only planning to publish the erotic chapters here on literotica, but I am debating whether or not to include chapter synopsis for chapters not included here. For those interested in the plot and story before the full publication @ completion.

Are you planning to continue writting more of this? Want to know what happened to Alex and who the woman is