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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 5 years ago
Very fun read

So happy she fell asleep after doing so much for him.

DocErotic3DDocErotic3Dabout 5 years ago

Fairly well done, although she doesn't come across as a very sympathetic character. I feel things were a bit rushed and could have had more detail all around.

Keep writing but don't rush things.

prop69prop69almost 5 years ago
John does not deserve her pussy or ass.

Looking forward to the next chapter

StrappySandalsStrappySandals9 months ago

Interesting story except for the Character John - I'd dump that dolt and rewrite with someone at least a little likable...

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