All Comments on 'Cruise Doubledate with My Sister'

Still a five star vacation from my boring life. Thanks for reposting. Thanks for your time writing. More please....

This is one of the best stories I’ve read on here, and undoubted how anyone could not like it. I thought I had it in my favorites but couldn’t find it. It is definitely going back on my list. Didn’t read it this time but it is one I will definitely read again and again in the future. Thanks for reposting it.

Well worth reading. Well thought out writing. Interesting twists during the read.

this definitely deserves a sequel

with caitlin teaching some girl on girl

I really missed your stories, great to see them comming back

Good story. Somehow the last chapter was posted again after your epilogue.

I’m so glad you are back.

I thought Tommy should have left her at the dock. Don't trust a cheater, they are just one bed away from destroying your soul.

A fantastic story, I quickly became invested in the characters and the story. 5 stars from me

teaching her for somebody else to enjoy? Oh, hell no.

Keep up good work 👍

Another excellent story please keep writing them for us to read and enjoy.

great to read this again!

something odd happened. looks like the last page was added twice

Greet story. keep the story going. glad you came back. Remember to write for your enjoyment as much as ours

The doubl ending is a bit unnerving, but otherwise a great story. A little saddened about the ending as its not the one I was expecting. Fully expecting a Caitlyn Thomas Lisa threesome to develop, with Rebecca left to live with the consequences of her actions alone. Disappointed, but as far as RAAC goes, at least this one didnt leave a bad taste in my mouth as everyone got to keep their dignity

This 1 starred for the MC being a wishy washy simp bitch that gets back with the bitch. Any following of this would be an LW years later where Rebecca fucks some other dude or Jacob himself. Nevermind the non-incest ending, this alone deserved the rating. Sorry but not sorry.

I took you advice and looked up your other stories and realized I've already read and like some of them! 5 stars for this one. I'm hoping Caitlyn's subsequent visit ends up with her and Rebecca become lovers. Love all around with family support.

Very enjoyable. Good job!

"Ok, so you dumped me, and fucked Jacob repeatedly - oh sorry, made love - but it was just a mistake? Oh, that's ok, don't worry about it! All is forgiven!"

Also, Rebecca wayyy too accepting of their incest - especially for someone of her upbringing.

I enjoyed this one , i remember before you deleted your stories, their was one where the older brother saved the sister from a party gone wrong and she went on a date with him that was my favorite one sucks I didn’t screenshot it. But reading your other reposted stories and the new ones you written has given me nostalgia.

Please get proofreader. You duplicated most of the second last page on the the last page.

What a great story, so glad that the underlying issues where resolved and all except Jacob, he was just an dick head

Thanks for all the comments. I don't know what happened, but page 10 is mostly a duplicate of page 9. I've submitted an edit to remove page 10

Yes, it was long, but it was necessary to define the main characters. Well-deserved rating of 5!

No way this is 4.6 rating. Better than other "stories" who have better rating.

Caitlyn is a great character but man, Rebecca and Thomas are both such losers. Especially Tommy, what a twat lol

Nicely done story, especially as it lays out the frission between healthy recreational/ loving sex on the one hand and fundamentalist caring on the other. Nicely done!

Terrific por…, er,, that is, erotic literature. Skillfully written too. Was semi-hating on the Rebecca character but you made the reunion ever so much more than palatable. Thank you!

Okay so it was an error but I kinda liked an extra page / epilogue after the author's notes lol

You did too good a job making Rebecca a completely unlikeable character.

You're a fantastic writer. It was great to reread this tale again.

I have read this story before you must have reposted it though I don't know why you even took it down

Please bring back story of lawyer Sister in lingerie!

This was written really well. Kept me captivated all the way through.

The length didn't seem to matter. I enjoyed it

It's one of my favorite story on this site. I read it several times. Overall your are one of the best writer here.

CINCO ESTRELLAS!

There is room for a spin off of this story. The sister can vist or move in with you. Caitlin can bring a boyfriend to visit and there be a Bisexual order and so much more. If you need help writing it let me know.

I love your stories! Usually, before reading them I translate them to German - so I can read and enjoy your stories more fluently....

You need to write more like this, not necessarily incestuous but more like how sex doesn't always mean the whole world but can be the doorway to it.

I could see Caitlin eventually moving in with them… And Lisa as well… Rebecca seems to like sharing her man. Not a duck queen, but definitely one to enjoy the presence of another woman to add spice…

A good read with a very interesting plot twist. Relationships are so complex with lots of speed bumps, detours, pot holes, and dead ends along the road of life. The ending was solid with room for an extended series. But I didn't understand why Paul became a groomsman as there didn't seem to be a real connection with those two guys.

This was an excellent read!

Love the story.

I soon realised that I had read it before, but couldn't stop reading it. There seem to have been changes, although I can't identify them.

Tremendous. The time and effort to expand the story well beyond the sexual, is inspired.

Take a well deserved, bow, 8letters!

My mind has it eventually going to a polyamorous life with Caitlin moving to Boston where no one knows she is a sister and the Triad becomes permanent

Thank you so much for writing this epic tale of bro and sis. I have been looking for this story after I first read it before you vanished..lol. I immediately reread this story and did find it different it some ways. I would love to get ahold of your original, if that's possible? Keep going further and you now have another big fan to help support you!!

Outstanding story, well written and well developed characters, and you accomplished all that without excessive, annoying physical description of an 18-inch cock or triple DD tits (other writers PLEASE take note.) I am looking forward to reading all of your stories here and appreciate your reposting them.

Great story, the plot twists and changes worked in a wholly believable way, characters and their interactions fully developed. So good I read it all the way through without a break.

I really liked these characters and would love to read more about them.

This story was my favorite of all the ones I have read from you. I really like that you got the right couple together at the end. A bit too preachy in places possibly but otherwise an easy paced nice guy wins in the end story.