All Comments on 'Cruise Ship Hypnosis Pt. 01 Ch. 01'

Simple but fun. A hot sex scene or two would have made it a five star.

My only criticism was the part where Matt basically repeated what Katie had already observed. It got me wondering if having Matt in the room added anything to the story at all. Slightly different to the previous commentator, I liked it because it didn't need wild sex scenes to make it erotic!

a little sex would have been great, but very entertaining all the same. maybe another couple chapters to add more seduction.

Boring, no i didnt finish. I woke up and found another story.