All Comments on 'Crunch Time'

Elaine ...

What a pleasure! ... An articulate, witty write -- 'piece' ( pun intended! ) of literature.

I hadn't read any of your stuff before ... usually I go back to the first story submitted; didn't this time -- since this is today's offering. ... You can be sure that I will go back and read many more!

... Take Care, Stay Safe

Tail_Gunner AKA Levi Coldwater.

That was a very interesting take on Valentines, Cupid doing his bit. Such a diverse cast of characters and situations, I was trying to pick a favourite but they all worked so well be it a Library virgin to an ex porn star. Well done Elaine, a delightful read with my morning coffee. Cheers, Andy

Thanks for the good words!

I could expand this into more sex, more titillation. I was going more for story. Reflected in the stats, but I'm not a stat whore so that works for me.

Glad to see folks appreciate story, even here :)

Fun story. Erotic situations taken lightheartedly. Keep up the great work.