All Comments on 'Crusade Gone Awry Ch. 07'

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JessicaAlexanderJessicaAlexanderover 4 years ago
Love it!

I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter!!! You could use an editor/proof reader but I'm not complaining. Keep up the awesome writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I'm sorry I meant to select 5*!!! Can I fix it?

Great story! I'm looking forward to the possibilities this series has with the interconnected threads!

Amariel_PanaceaAmariel_Panaceaover 2 years ago

Oh I love this story. I would love to see further stories with the two of them and her having his hellpups!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Poorly edited and simplistic dialog. Beast sex with a hell hound had promise but your sex scenes left me flat. 2/5 at best

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I would have given this chapter 6 stars if I could. :)

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Has anyone seen a job listing for god of chaos? I would be great at that job.

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