All Comments on 'Crush'

Doesn't anyone use the spell check?? I got confused because you could not remember which name to use. Try proof reading before you submit it.

Although I agree with wgr1944, it was a well told story easily worth a "5".

I will look for your stories in the future.

THANK YOU!

i liked it a lot. Well told, can relate to the kid..can picture her.i also will look fopr more stories

Some spelling and grammatical errors, but a very well written story. You don't get into details which are awkward to describe but I still felt as if I started to know the characters. Perfect imagination and creativity in my opinion.

who cares about the spell check, this was the best read I've had in a long time.I must think the writter,to be a woman it was great and thank you....

I just want to say ~~ the story was great and one that really held your attention and could not wait to see how it ended and it did with the only way it could. I don't ever care about the spelling as I myself am not perfect and to those who made bad comments are not perfect either. I just like to read a really good story and I just did.!

Thank you hammertime. JAG

Great story, well told. Yes, some poor spelling (meruver? where did *that* one come from? maneuver! and want/won't). But unlike some of the other efforts here, your story was well told and so made the errors much easier to ignore. Well done!

-- the_scratcher

Very Good Story. How nice would it be for some if life more often than not immitated fiction.

I loved this story. I got hard in the learning to dance scenes and stayed that way till the end. Keep on writing.

The story is erotic and can turn you on.

Perfect imagination u have that, drew me in2 the story straight away, creativity u got that as well, i have added u 2 my fav's list and given u a 5star, hope ur other stories r like this and better, mayb the brother's could have done something 2gether i thought that straight away when Carol woke up and couldnt find Gene

Clearly one of your main sexual interests is to explore sex with other males or between two males and you use the "wife" as a catalyst. So far every one of your stories are pretty imaginative but follow the same mind blowing (to me) theme of wife sharing between two or more men. Not just group sex but specifically a guy wanting another man to have sex with his wife. Not even for the "quid pro quo" of getting access to the other man's woman, but to enjoy the other guy being inside of the wife's pussy.

Apart from your really really bad spelling and so on, you seem like you really have a knack for telling a story which is no small deal. It's just a shame about your wife-sharing kink - you need to skip out of that groove once in a while. It makes reading your stuff degrade into "here we go again with the other man" just when the story gets going.

This author is good in expressing himself to the enjoyment of others. To the people who make comments - only to complain using profanity - they demonstrate an inability to express themselves any other way but by being rude. Please ignore their comments Hammertime and continue bring enjoyment to others. If they can only express themselves in such a manner - they do not deserve any consideration or time what so ever.

Really great story. I read your profile, don't see how the BIGOTS could get anything from that. They can't express themselves at all and are just JEALOUS!!! Keep on writing. I really enjoyed the story. The lucky kid!

Spelling and grammatical errors distracted me from truly enjoying this story. I recommend some proofreading. Otherwise, it was lovely.

very good story with a little feeling in it too.

WTF do you expect from a nigger ? Those black tow animals are good just for one thing. To tow !! "1*" !

He should have kicked Ray out & not keep him around after he skipped the scholarship. Gene should have figured it out that if he couldn't find his own prom date he's not going to be able to find his own wife!

Waiting for ur new story

but I still have a hard time with a scum of the earth cheating slut as she was...

Good story and as hot as this babe sounds

This story sounds just like mine I left with my brother and his wife and two boys they were one and two years old I live with them for four years when I got out of prison by the second night that I was there my brother was not home so then my sister in law came out of her room after the boys went to bed then she came into the room where I was that with just a long shirt no bra no panties and told me she wanted to fuck me of course I didn’t hesitate she was a pretty woman little on the heavy side but that’s how I like him of course I did not hesitate we did fuck for a couple of hours till he got home she washed up went to her room she was asleep so now for years have passed and I was still Live in there with them and still have sex for the last four years he did not know what was going on she never said nothing and buy the 4 year she told me she was following the love with me she also said she cannot make love to my brother like she does me so then after she told me she was falling in love she also said she wanted a baby so I had a big smile and said hell yes I want you for myself and I give you a baby if you like so then I did get her pregnant I was happy so when I got her pregnant I will down to get a place for me and her and her two boys so then she left moved in together with me to this day 24 years later we are still together and the sex is still good we still talk about the crazy things we’ve done every time we do talk about how we never got caught in four years and make sure horny and now every now and then my brother will talk shit for taking his wife but it’s OK I love knowing that I took his wife

One of the best stories, had almost everything! Maybe a little more sexual descriptions, about the MFM

It's hard to stop fucking your sister-in-law once you start. My older brother was married to a beautiful slim, blue-eyed blond. She was sexy, wonderful shapely legs. Always kept me hot for her. I stayed with them, off and on, during vacations from school when I was younger. She turned me on so much. I sniffed her worn panties and pantyhose, got upskirt peeks and saw her thick bush and big pussy lips. Her pussy smell was heavenly. I jacked off a million times to her. Many times she would go around the house with just a simple little housecoat and nothing on underneath. Sometimes she would dress with the bedroom door open when my brother was not around. She knew I got hard as a rock all the time. They moved farther away and I did not see them as frequently. She just got better looking. After I was in my twenties, I met her and we went for a drive. She was wearing a short dress with pantyhose and no panties. She was the passenger and she turned toward me and put her left leg up in the car seat and let me look at her pussy through the sheer nylon of her pantyhose. I got a close look at her hairy pussy and her full lips. The sheer nylon was soaked. I reached out to feel her and she let me. She told me she knew that I had wanted her

for years, and that she was now willing. We found a secluded place and she sucked me off. She said she had wanted to do that for years. I pulled off her pantyhose licked her and slid deep into her juicy pussy. It grasped me and pulled me in like a throbbing vice. She came so hard and I shot into her. We couldn't get enough of each other. She had the hottest pussy I ever had. Once, my brother asked me if she and I had ever done anything together (guess he suspected something). I told him that we had kind of played touchy-feely a time or two, but nothing serious. He never said anything. I think he knew how I had lusted after her all those years. And, I suspect he was kind of like the older brother in this story.

I watch lots of the talent contests -- The Voice, X Factor, _____ Got Talent. You can hear a gal sing, hitting the notes right, timing and all technically precise.

Then sometime you hear another gal sing the same song with an emotion, expression, energy. and/or sound to her voice that reaches out and grabs you making you sit up and listen, even though it was not so technically precise as gal number one.

That's the way I view hammertime (judging from this one and only story I've read so far). He's got that storytelling something that grabs you and makes you want to read, even when technically (spelling, grammar) it's not up to snuff. Inborn talent is hard to beat.

Of course, the ultimate is when the singer (or storyteller) not only has the reach-out-and-grab-you quality, but also excells technicality. But still, hammertime is miles ahead of most writers on this site, and well deserving of 5 stars for this compelling story.

Paul in Oklahoma

How about writing a sequel to Crush that specifically focuses on the events that lead to the threesome between Carol, Gene, and Ray?

That would make for an awesome story as we are curious to know the hot details relating to the threesome after Ray's college graduation?

Great Story

Good story and I gave it a 5 because you ended it with a good wrap-up.

Damn that was hot!

Excellent⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Wow what a hot story, I usually don't like wife sharing or cuckolding of a husband. But this turned out to be so more than just a prom date for Ray and in the end it became of a polymerous relationship between the three of them and then with the getting Carol pregnant with the attitude it didn't matter and the brothers didn't seem to care or be bothered who was the father only that there was a child conceived.

This was a well written hot hot story an gets my 5 star vote.

Great story! Ray was in the driver's seat with Gene at work every day. I wouldn't have allowed Ray home all day to fuck my wife, no matter how much she was willing to put out for me....seconds every day isn't for me! I would've told Ray to hit the road, permanently!!

This is a very, very hot story!

Sexy plot but way too many grammatical errors. Or even wrong words. Saying as a non-native English speaker, get some (a lot of) reviewing done next story. But continue this kind of storyline. Hard all the way through!

Very erotic and sexy story. Yes a few grammar and spelling errors but still provocative and hot as hell. Excellent story and a heck of a plot. Brothers end up sharing hot wife, love it to pieces. Keep up the good work.

Being with another man's wife is erotically born of the time when human beings lived in packs. Man & woman needed to necessarily pair off to have children and raise them. This was the basic pattern ... except for the Alpha Male! The AM was chief pack protector and warrior and he alone (or with fellow warriors) accepted almost all the risk if the pack was attacked. AMs typically did not live very long in their role as respected human shields ... yet still possessed the best genes to protect and propagate the species.

As such the AM slept with any woman he wanted in the pack whenever he wanted ... period.

From this naturally came many, many kinks. Voyeurism, Cuckold, and in the case of AMs being the husband's father or brother, they were still fully entitled to enjoy the added taboo, lust, and intense orgasm with a son's wife or brother's wife which they so rightfully earned.

Interestingly, the increased satisfaction and pleasure for the Alpha Male in being with another man's wife, led to a much more copious and forceful ejaculation ... which increased his odds of him fathering more children in the pack. Jealousy in these days was a moot point because AMs had already proven themselves top warrior.

As mankind moved from being pack mammal to being the more current paradigm of jealous socially driven binary only pairs ... we see research that is clear: no animal in the natural animal kingdom is monogamous ... so we have to wonder what is happening to our gene pool (and the intensity of our orgasms).

Personally as a voyeur and cuckold (with an astoundingly beautiful wife) I assure you my wife, myself, and our AMs all have absolutely incredible orgasms.

After 15 years and well into our late 30's the sex just keeps getting wetter and better.

The invention of the birth control pill & STD testing has made this experience no more difficult than an educated and honest adult conversation with your partner and anyone you invite into your "pack".

For the record my wife is " on the pill " which is absolutely wonderful for spontaneous sex.

She's 5 foot 2 and a real blonde with green eyes and no tattoos. She was a college gymnast who never stopped taking care of herself. Its no surprise she easily (and has always) attracted AMs.

She started out with my father (in his early 40s) who she was very attracted to and with whom she has been with more times than I can count. My father is a quintessential Alpha Male who after the passing of my mother simply couldn't say no when we offered him "father-in-law with benefits". In simple terms my father's sex with my wife was (and is) the kind of sex you can smell from the hallway (or) smell next to my wife as she sits on the toilet and 'drops dad's kids off at the pool'.

My father was with my wife exclusively for 2 years until he re-married a woman half his age and gracefully bowed out to having sex with my wife (now only a few times a year).

Currently my wife has selected to add to our bed 2 Alph Males ... my little brother (who is very athletic and runs marathons) and my best friend (who is also very athletic and is former military). She has be with them both regularly for over 8 years now. Both of them are well aware of each other and both are married ... yet neither could say no when my wife offered to be their exclusive 'off menu' partner.

For my brother it takes place almost daily either in the morning on his way to work or during his lunch hour (he works less than a mile from our house) also during his every other weekend 'golf game' with me. For my best friend it takes place during his frequent business trips and at least weekly during our 'guy's night'.

A few time a year my wife also entertains my former boss ... which satisfies her attraction and craving for the occasional 'older man' when my father isn't available ... the best part is I get to watch it all because I telework from home.

Together these 4 men have all fathered a total of 9 children. Knowing their fertility is honestly the biggest turn on for me along with their eagerness and dedication (especially as Alpha Males) to exclusively and secretly be with my wife as their only extramarital partner - that is her biggest turn on.

All these factors make the sex incredibly intense and satisfying for my wife and absolutely epic for me to watch. It naturally follows with my wife safely on the pill that all her partners (after testing clean) have enjoyed completely unprotected sex with my wife from start to finish. And yes all her partners enjoyed all three of my wife's 'love languages'.

To this day my favorite partner to watch consummate my wife is still my father, followed closely by my brother. They both get off hard on morning sex & 'baby making' sex with my wife and go straight for her cervix when they ejaculate. The end result is enough seed to fill a silo. It leads to a specific kink I enjoy which is to sit next to my wife in church or out to breakfast after she has been with one of them.

My favorite person to watch undress my wife or have sex with her in the shower (or anywhere in our house outside our bed) is my best friend. At least once a week he will take my wife doggy, pull out, and shoot it on her hair, back, and finally in her furrow. I watch his semen drip from her sides and down her thighs as he re-enters her for round two. Never gets old.

Finally I love it when my wife gets the urge and goes to my old boss' office for a closed door meeting randomly a few times a year. Always comes home messy. One time she spent the week with him in his hotel room at a business conference. My wife came home with several videos of her dancing for him before she finished him off. My old boss has told me on several occasions that all his best orgasms in his life were in my wife. Now that is a huge turn on for me. When he comes to our house I like to be in my wife anally when he finishes in her vaginally so I can feel him flex with each ejaculation. The more flexing I count the better his orgasm. Typically 6 to 10 for him. He likes me to count them out loud for my wife and then I finish in her. Highly recommended as an intensely voyeuristic experience

Ultimately I know that I have the kind of wife that AMs are attracted to and that they cannot refuse when she offers ... which makes sharing her with them (or having sex with her 'dirty' after they leave) simply mind blowing. Eventually we'll stop a bit to have children and at some point we'll all get too old to play. Until then, we'll enjoy these apparently long lost forbidden pleasures which once advanced our gene pool ... back in the days of the human pack.

Just finished reading the previous post. Honestly, one of the most fascinating perspectives. I never considered humans as pack animals but after looking into it - it does appear back when we lived in caves, rank within the pack for both alpha males and alpha females did determined pretty much who had unchallenged selection of mates within the pack. Based on genetic testing of materials found in graves, this apparently included genetic evidence of alpha males cross-breeding among even paired/married couples and between family members including spouses of family members. Apparently no mate was off limits for pack alphas.

On a separate note: I found the previous post to be extremely hot, arousing, and erotic. Your life summary gets me off every time. I would love to be a fly on your wall Sir ! *Please* write and describe in detail some of the specific rendezvous between your Father/ Brother/ Best Friend/ and Boss/ with your beautifully short (5' 2") wife. I want to know more about her blonde hair, green eyes, and her athletic physique, but most importantly - what you describe as her "force of nature" sexual prowess in your bedroom while she's servicing these alpha males serially in front of you.

It sounds to me like your wife is an exhibitionist - you are a voyeur - and the alpha males you both hand selected to add to your pack are very much addicted to enjoying adulterous sex with your wife.

Hey ... I'm all in on discovering more regarding your very unique open marriage. Wondering if I could entice my wife to do the same things with a man I know she's very attracted to (my uncle).

I think it's possible if she reads your stories so *PLEASE* post your stories, thoughts and experiences on Literotica and please don't leave out the details ! Thank You !

Boy oh boy is that a great story. It has everything in the right amount. I'd like to read a little more about the Three some and the sex involved in it. Five very large shiny stars from me. Thank you for writing. Part 2 ?

I've been back every few days to read this summary of your wife's "sessions" with these alpha males. Starting to get a little obsessed just thinking about this whole arraignment. At this point I simply have to know for my "mind's eye" if there's an actresses or female athlete or porn actresses that resembles your wife ??? Please and Thank You !!!

Sorry for the delay ... life & sex all became busy in a good way post COVID-19. To your question: I would say the actresses or female athlete most resembling my wife would be Kelly Ripa ... but my wife is well over a decade younger and her face is more vertical than round. Otherwise her blonde hair, green eyes, and athletic physique are pretty spot on vs. Ripa.

I also asked my Father your question because he's been a regular unprotected sex partner with my wife the longest:

Is there's an actresses or female athlete or porn actresses that resembles your wife ? His reply? Hands down he says "a young Nina Hartley". Then he immediately and very bluntly says "just make sure your wife is taking her birth control pills because I'm coming over this weekend." My Father is awesome. You gotta love and respect an Alpha Male.