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mdb913about 17 years agoWhat the hell was that!?
Completely terrible. It's your second story, I know--but I would strongly recommend getting a good editor next time, because that was ghastly.
Anonymousabout 17 years agoGreat piece of work !
I REALLY enjoyed Crush. You build the story up well and brought it to a fine climax.
Don't be discouraged by the negative comments made by others.
KEEP WRITING !
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