All Comments on 'Crushed Pt. 02'

Maybe I don’t have super high moral standards for characters, but I didn’t mind Logan too much before. Now, I kinda like him. Those 24/7 d/s relationships always turn me off, so I’m glad you toned that part down. Oh yeah, the sex was hot. Probably not exactly what you should do in real life, especially with a new partner, but it’s smut; the author gets some creative license.

Sorry you are sick, but please write another part😃

5 stars our of 5, i'm so impressed with your writing.

It really takes me places!

I wasn’t sure where you were going with the storyline, but it’s turning into a good read. Thanks and look forward to the next chapters.

Logan is still a huge dick for his behavior and treatment of others. Primarily Alex but so many others that he bullied, made fun of, used sexually, was just shitty to…. So many. Ok, now we learn that his dad was a homophobic dick too and Logan surrounded himself with “friends” that were dicks- no excuse. And it wasn’t all in the far back past. Logan was a huge dick when he reconnected with Alex. Acting like his bullying was no big deal, just jokes and pranks, stealing his private journal, reading his most intimate thoughts and using us to blackmail and control Alex, ignoring him with Emma and not realizing how he hurt Alex. “I was a dick , I’m still a dick and I will continue to be a dick” - that says it all. You’ve made him too hateful, too dickish, too unlikeable and too damaged. He can’t be forgiven believably. He’s just not a kind person at his core. Alex is much too good for him.

This is a great story! Please keep going!

Lol not Logan's redemption arc being karma heaped on him tenfold, I thoroughly enjoyed it. I empathize with what happened to him and now understand why he acted the way he did but he had a choice towards his evil ways against Alex and others and this is justice to me.

Love this story can’t wait to see more

I really enjoyed this and yes the first one was dark but it needed to be I hope logon’s mum is supportive even if his dads a cock head and hope that Chris guy gets it there’s no excuse for outing someone I think that’s the cruelest thing you can do to someone

Please write some more

Yes more please!

This was great- and I want to see where it goes!!!

I know chapter 3 has been posted but how there is no comment concerning the author's health. Covid is not just a flu and everyone should take this serious.

Hi Anonymous,

Thanks for the concern! Totally fine and was virtually symptom free :) found it a bit hard being cooped up on my own but all fine and healthy now! Hope you can enjoy chapter three, ch4 is being written currently x