All Comments on 'Crystal Clear Ch. 09'

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john1946john1946about 11 years ago
Better

It just keeps getting better and better. I really enjoy the way you teel the story and the lessons you impart. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Birth announcement for...

Crystal Lee Ellis?

Keep'm coming!

GizmorGizmorabout 11 years ago
Crystal

You just have to enjoy a fine Wine. Thanks,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Impressive

You just keeping getting better and better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Mindless prattle .

This is really pathetic effort at a stroke story. Tallentless and hard to read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Missed detail

Your attention to detail is amazing but I have to point out one minor opportunity you missed to incorporate an odd detail. From Indianapolis to I-94 they would have traveled on I-69. I'm sure you could have incorporated that detail into an event.

arrowglassarrowglassalmost 10 years ago
Love it!!!!

Absolutely love the way you have ended the last couple of stories...on to Ch. 10!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Thanks for great story

Thanks for mentioning Jackson Michigan my home town

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
just a great story

another 5 star chapter!!! love Jim, Crystal - everyone!

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