by Tenzo
Can't wait for ch 2! I guess the biggest thing I would say when dealing with this genre is... details, details, details, lol, as you lead us through the exploration of this new world. I really can't wait to see what you have created!
There are few great Sci-Fi stories here and I think this could be among them. I really look forward to your next chapter and the world you create. Great work so far!
Like NMT said, give lots of details and descriptions, esp of the new world so we can picture it. Interesting background he has. Does Nikolai know anything about his past? How did he get out of that and become a doctor? I look forward to more and hope you put out a new chap. soon