by call_me_dana
This story need a better ending then the one you gave it. it begs for more detail. I hope you continue it as it was a good start.
You have a great writing skill, and the scenes flow soo naturally, I envy you! But like another reader wrote, you need a better (longer intimate scenes, what follows) closing. Most of us would like to find out if he will see her again, what is next, etc. However, you can describe these fantastic creatures sooo well, please keep on writing.
The story was well put together. I read it as a type of dare to myself to read in this category. This confirms that I won't be back.
Oh wow so hot of a story. I live in San Diego just a short distance from La Jolla. I’d love to meet Cuba. Sho sounds so sexy. This story is so worth 15 hot hard stars…..🤤
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