All Comments on 'Cuba'

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ScriblerScriblerover 17 years ago
Finish it!!!

This story need a better ending then the one you gave it. it begs for more detail. I hope you continue it as it was a good start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
More, more, more

You have a great writing skill, and the scenes flow soo naturally, I envy you! But like another reader wrote, you need a better (longer intimate scenes, what follows) closing. Most of us would like to find out if he will see her again, what is next, etc. However, you can describe these fantastic creatures sooo well, please keep on writing.

RealDocRealDocalmost 9 years ago
I have been advised

The story was well put together. I read it as a type of dare to myself to read in this category. This confirms that I won't be back.

ShortyMacShortyMac10 months ago

Oh wow so hot of a story. I live in San Diego just a short distance from La Jolla. I’d love to meet Cuba. Sho sounds so sexy. This story is so worth 15 hot hard stars…..🤤

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I've been writing stories since high school. I even shared a few with my yearbook teacher and got a kiss for endeavors. The stories are from real life experiences and real life fantasies. I write to images I see in day to day life, or wish I did. I hope you enjoy.