by lovelesspulchritude
Would be hotter if the boys had brought their real mom instead of this young step-mom...
I don't get why he keeps calling the douchebag his son. This is just another wimpy ass cuck and slut story. Has promise if the old man had a spine and fought back, fucking with their plans.
What an excellent story! Revenge is certainly a dish served cold, and with a vengeance.
Well there was no likable characters 2 wasn't a incest story as it involved the step mom which is of no blood relation and add to the point Carl wasn't even his son in the first place the story had a chance to be decent if a couple of things would have been met 1 if it would have been incest like you said it was by putting it in the incest catagory and 2 the main thing is if you would have at least wrote the mc which is the husband with a spine you know basically a husband who has balls for the life of me I don't see how anyone who writes these types of stories can rightfully call themselves a man I say this cause no man would disgrace themselves by writing a story about a man with no balls and nor would a man stand by and let this happen there is other way to write a revenge story then pathetic shit like this this was fucking pathetic and the writer seems to me to be a pathetic excuse of a so called man