All Comments on 'Cucking gone wrong'

Well it was definitely short.

No real sex. Interesting story. Would like to know who the wife is.

Would love to read more.

I get it. What goes around, comes around.

Short but excellent.

The only acceptable way for a cuckolding story to end.

Karma's a bitch. Would love to read more!

that ending is open

I like the plot itself, but the story just feels... incomplete. And kinda of unsatisfactory.

And, by unsatisfactory, I don't mean that the son should have gone on a murder rampage or something... I'd just LOVE to know how in the world this family was apparently able to go ten years without realizing how much damage they caused.

The way his mother doesn't get why her sister is angry with her, the way they are all shocked upon hearing the son's words through the phone, the way they didn't have any contact for ten years after he trashed the house but then still think he would come running because of the heart attack...

It's like, were they just that delusional? Or are they disassociating their sex from their family life? Was it the father's influence that conditioned them that way? I need answers to those questions. A hundred extra words would have been enough.

Looking forward to many more chapters because of the open ending.

Short and sweet.

4, definitely feels like a part of a larger story, really more of an outline. Well written and has some hooks like the missing 10 years for Brad, how the aunt is involved (I would think the mom would recognize her sister's voice so its doubtful she is his wife), and what sort of revenge if any Brad might want to take with his former family trying to get involved in his life again with his father's impending demise.

This was great. However it was very short. It should have been longer with more story from when Bradly leaves home to the story of the aunt and to where he is now. Maybe more after story where the aunt knows about Bradly's life and family and has never told the family.

Good concept, but maybe a little bit TOO short. And while this is Literotica and not the real world, I don't know why the mother or sister would think the son/brother would want to hear from them 10 years later, especially after the exceptionally cruel way they treated him.

I liked it .another BTF to add to the list of satisfying revenges . I’m glad you gave us a little something to hold us over till one of your other larger stories comes out or is updated, can’t wait for to see what you have in store for us whether it be a new story or a new chapter of broken , sky high after dark pharaohs curse , or your other stories

What would have been more satisfying, would be if after destroying the items Bradley had given his family, waited till his Father returned home then kneecap him with, say, a baseball bat, the family would go apeshit and threaten to take him to court, but that would just expose the family's lifestyle to the rest of the community - then he leaves them in shambles.

Definitely a short story. Looks like it has real potential to be a longer story.

Holy crap! Cucking gone WAY wrong! Like Dr. Dre says: “…fuck with me, it’s a must that i fuck with you”!

Well played, Bradly

Atleast he did not become a simp for the family pussy after being dismissed

The best way for a cuckold story to end is for to not have ever started in the first place.

My favorite cuck story! I hate this shit! Good to see it end realistically. Not sure why i read this, hoping for this ending probably. Thank you!

You have a good core story, but this feels more like an outline then a complete work compared to everything else you put out.

What happened over the ten years?

It seems like your MC got a family and is happy but is clearly still jaded by the past. Can you flesh this out or have a folowup that is more fleshed out?

It was kinda of enjoyable but gross more like your teasing us with what could be a bigger story. Would love to read an expanded version what the intervening 10 years.

did story get cut off or something, or is it a teaser for a longer story?

meh... not your best work. sorry.

Unlike others, for me the story was complete. It wasn't about his family fucking each other, it was about his reaction. We got that. Could it have had more information about his life afterwards? Maybe, but then that would have lessened the last paragraph.

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Personally, I would have thought to record them together and send the video to the police. However, that would have changed the story and not been what you wanted.

And to think . . . Those two women could have fashioned their own fucking fest by controlling Jr and Dad.

This story seems like a soul71 version of a JustPlainBob story. It's just too short and ends too abruptly.

Well since this was so short, I'm hoping since the mother and sister are such unthinking sluts, they should be able to jump into the son's/brother's bed VERY easily. Not that it will be without emotional pains for them and sadly the son as they try to work things out, probably quite a few hate fucks on his end to even begin to clear his emotional turmoil up. It sounds like the rest of the family probably suspected this some time before the son revieled this, with how easy it was taken as fact.

Short and to the point.

I'm confused - is this part of a different story? It's well-written but very short and seems almost like the epilogue or a teaser for another, longer work.

Is this your best? No but is a good story that I enjoyed. Thanks

Kinda reminds me of your "A Family Destroyed" story! Thanks Soul 71. 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

Personally I’d like to see to more to this. Yes you ended the story well but as you do so well it’s also open ended enough to continue.

Well, as one already commented, "short and to the point". It doesn't need anymore; however, if you happened to get bored and look at it again, us readers will certainly take what you give. Grouch6977

This is a very good short story with a lot of things happening over the life of the story.

Excellent job!

Satisfying. One of your best. Would love an extended part in the future

MORE!!!!!!!!!!

MORE!!!!!!

I'm surprised the below 4 rating honestly, and I don't think this particular story deserves it, since your usual go would Brad going back to the family and after some tits flashed he'd cave to every whim of the bitches while claiming to get his revenge what in reality isn't true, BUT, it is somehow a balance to the other stories that you made and doesn't deserve the ratings they have, like Miracle Cream.

4.5 stars - he should have burned their house down when he left, that'd make it a full 5 stars.

Would love a continuation where tames the others but still love it as always

Yeah, I am with everyone that commented on this story., this needs a continuation. Their is so much story there that needs to be fleshed out.

Satisfying. I'd like a continuation where he makes them miserable but at the same time weirdly I don't necessarily need one.

The skanks are looking for a new bull in the sun and they are SOL.

Liked the story. It seemed incomplete - really short. I think there's room for another chapter.

This is complete. They don't deserve to submit to him. Banishing them from his life is the best response.

Just when it was getting good it stopped!

I like it even though it was a short wr

So many unanswered questions needs a good couple of chapters to finish this incomplete story. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I know you said that it's short but another page would've been good to disclose what happened to the dad if he died or not and what happened to the mother and sister and more into on Brad

Come on, man, good work but we need more, no redemption, no conciliation, just some good revenge and choices/concequences learn from his ex-family.

The we need a "what happen on time", on his life til this time.

And for final he can reject his family, just like they reject him.

In resume, WE NEED MORE PLZ!".

I do love how his characters go on a rampage, sometimes its the best part. 5/5

Great job! Please continue the story.

I like this story and it needs a continuance please :)

On a side note I never understood this bull stuff, why would you want to be referenced as a cow, cows are disgusting albeit delicious in steak form, yeah not a flattering term, yeah you can fuck a number of women a day repeatedly but you’ll never provide anything and just be carted around by some old dude with a Stetson to another ranch

Honestly, what did his family expect? I love how they all seemed so concerned and shocked at his reaction to what they did to him. All things considered, I'd say his reaction was rather on the mild side of things; If I were in his shoes, I would have been hard pressed not to consider killing every one of them. And did they need to go with that route? All he did was admit his feelings to the "woman" (I use the word loosely) that he loved, and their response is to go with the nuclear option? She could have simply told him that she didn't return his feelings and left it at that, but instead, she and their parents decided to (figuratively) rip his heart out of his ass (sans lube) and stomp on it in front of him, converting whatever affection and love he had for them into rage and hatred and permanently dividing their family. And his mother trying to speak to him in the caring "mom voice" while forcing him to watch? Disgusting on so many levels. I'd say they got off easy, considering he didn't go with the option that involved locking them in their rooms at night and burning the house down with them still inside.

Only thing that could of made it better was if he beat his father before he left, and made the girls watch. That would of broke them all.

honestly, this is cathardic finally a cuck story where the cuck didnt just take it, and made something of himself.

Great story it’s a shame it’s so small you could let Brad destroy them so bad that I’d love to read all about it lol.

good story , definitely needs a follow up

5 STARS, again!