All Comments on 'Cuckold'

A brilliantly erotic story, wish i could give it a higher rating.

-26thNC approved

Way too destructive and harsh. "Constructive humiliation" has to be rooted in some truth, but the flaying alive of a person's self-worth, their psyche and their role in the exploited relationship is far beyond any sexual and psychological benefits. It deviates from the realm of humiliation into destructive cruelty. Writing about the nuances - those mind games that sting without damaging - is not easily done. It is a bit like someone writing about being a human cannonball who's never been fired from a cannon. This story is more like using a cat-o-nine tail whip with metal points to "warm up someone's bum", so to speak. Overkill in an erotic story is never good.

I dunno, Legio. It’s gotten the best response by far of any of my stories.

Fucking shit. This should have been posted in 'Gay Male', which is what I'd have logged onto if I wanted to read about men doing things with each other.