All Comments on 'Cuckold Beginnings Ch. 01'

To tell you the truth, I'm not sure if I'm going to like the story. I think you should have waited and added more of what is going to happen next. Sorry but right now it was just a pretty boring "fuck story" for me. I'll look for the next chapter but...

And not done well at all. Wimps will see hope in this "story." Men with their manhood intact will not. Judge yourself by that rule.

saying she loves big dicks, is saying you have a big dick. She really has nothing to compare to so the question and the answer are meaningless. A couple playing at fantasy games. Nothing new here. But when a woman moves from fantasy to acting outside of the marriage in reality means the marriage is over. Yep they say they love you, but what they love is security, a home paid for, and their expenses paid, so they can go out and get laid until they either get messed up on drugs, abused/killed. or get AIDS or some STD. Yep she ooves hubby, just give her a wamm house when she needs it, and the credit cards with no limits. That way she can have sex with any lowlife she can find without expecting him to do anything but knock her up.

Good beginning- don't stop now!

That's it!!! There is no story here. The title said Cuckold, but there was nothing that related to cuckolding in this story. You should have got her involved with someone else to establish the start of a cuckolding relationship.

What is this crap? Just BAD.<P>They are not married so where is Loving Wives? Cuckold is not in your dictionary I guess. The writing is not very good. Please tell me you submitted this little note by mistake. You need some real help in developing a story as this is not even a good wanker story.

Please tell more.....

I don't understand why you would write this story. To most stright males we don't understand this compulsion and won't find the story enjoyable or erotic. Then there is the humilation of being a cockold and watching stronger men take your wife and you enjoying it. Last the disapointment than the disdain your wife feels as this evolves. Not a pretty sight, think I'll skip the rest. Hope this isn't really your life!

I think the first comment was about right. They wrote that they couldn't make much from what was written. While he has some idea of what might happen in part two I think you should have told us a bit more. I know where you were going with the big cock comments but I would have gone with a little less "big cock" chanting and come up with a discussion of other men, a bigger penis, etc. This would have set up your second part better. I am guessing you were trying to be subtle and that's great but there is a fine line between being subtle and just leaving something important out. Still it was a good start and please don't pay any attention to the moronic comments. They just hang around on this site looking for a place to leave retarded comments

I would hope that the cuckholding will eventually come to the conclusion that she gets pregnant by you...

Free advice from a woman like da Bazzster is tainted by her need to feel like a wimpish helpless humiliated excuse for a man or this writer.<P>

What a great start for a new talent into the absurdity of male self disrespect & self disgust which only excites those very jaded sordid few so addicted to self demeanment - how puzzling it is that he could be addicted to the sub-human feeling of less than others - so excited by lowering himself to below fetish standards.<P>

Like an demented soul seeking to destroy themself and the life they wish they still had. How sad except for those worse off - eh Bazzster.

Unlike some of the others, I don't mind the rather short first part. It serves as an aperitif, knowing that the fish course is soon to follow.

I would urge you to watch your varied use of verb tenses though, keep them consistent.

A pretty good first-effort.

A yes I knew the ever present Anonymous in USA would rear his fruity head for this story. Where else but on Literotica can a self hating donkey read stories that turn his stomach and then leave moronic comments - Eh Anonymous in USA. Why don't you take up another self detructive form of fun. I know a nice stretch of railroad track where three people have been run over within the last year. Care to make it four Fruity?

A good start. I look forward to more

YOU CAN'T SAY that your girlfriend "is very tight as you're the only man she's ever slept with"!If you sleep with her quite a lot and have "a reasonable dick",YOU CAN VERY WELL STRETCH HER PUSSY!THERE'S NO NEED for her to be fucked by a very large dick to stop being "very tight"!