by andrewforfun
The bully and thug aspect, complete with the ass kicking of the wimp by the bully...and the spit too, you really captured the essence of wimp humiliation. Nice work, I'd love to read more from you.
In real life the black fucker and his son would look like Swiss cheese with all of the bullet holes in his black chest. Even the most timid man could never put up with kind of treatment. But as a fantasy, I guess some people would like to feel that they had that much power over another person.What ever floats your boat. I guess?...Rich
Could be the start of a great serie. I appreciate the fact that your story leaves place to our imagination. The best stories I read were like that. Moreover you could be up to something in the range of mafia or street gang type of story wich are not so commun around here. We don't know exactly how the couple came to that point and if the tugs have such a hold on them they could have a hold on a lot of others... so there's still a lot of door to open.
Still pay attention to stay realistic and credible in your storyline and don't drop too far on the gay side of this story (you would lose a lot orf readers).
Can't wait for more.
i'd love to one day be cuckolded by a Black Man/Men patmabuttocks@hotmail.com
I really enjoyed it and would love to read more. Having the cuck suck cock was great and I would love to read about how stretched Claudias holes are. I would alo love to read abou Andrew getting ass rucked by both BBC! 5/5
This is how all superior black men should treat white wimps. I loved the spitting and oral rape and how the white wimp just accepted everything. I hope they degrade him even more and knock up his wife.
I'm SO happy you never continued because this was simply terrible on so many levels.
to piss of the Annony haters and ass wipes on here.
Kinky tale,looking foreward to where next part of story goes...
I have always wanted to be cockold by a few alpha black men and serve them as they take my wife as theirs. My little white 4” dicklet has never gotten her off and I use fat black dildo on her. I lick it clean after getting her off. I am ready for some real black cocks to submit to.
Just the thought of being dominated by two big black beautiful cocks had me creaming in my pants .
boss would be choking on a bullet and tyrone would be several inches short on his manhood after i bit it off and shoved my blade up his rear from this prison like forced rape
I like the story giving it 4 stars, I hope you get your readers to the place where we can invest in the
characters.. I think it has lots of room to run.
Great story of submission. Can’t wait to read next part. I see Tyron sharing the innocent wife with a bunch of his friends at a breeding party, turning her into a breeder for black impregnating.