by FifthEstate
Phenomenal follow up! The Cedric/Casey sex is one of the best IR scenes I’ve ever read on this site. 5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Another Classic!
I am a huge fan, but this has to be one of your best stories yet. I thought Ced fucking KC was really hot, but that part about the jersies was as good as anything I can remember. Your a awesome writer! Pllleeeaassee don’t make me wait for chapter 4.
Kacey is super hot, but Taylor's tits are bigger and I think she's going to fuck Cedric's big black dick right off!
Beautifully written. I have a feeling that Taylor is going to really get into it! Amy
This series is really good. I'm looking forward to reading more about the adventures of Cedric. I would love to see Kacey being bred.
Spell-binding.....captivating.....cock-hardening.....superbly told tale of seduction. Omg, I love it.......can hardly wait for more!
Ced Brown's The Man!
Your Cedric Brown certainly isn't as nefarious as Stormbringer's Solomon King or TheCryptkeeper's Reggie Johnson or probably even your own Cole Steele, but he sure is good at what he does! The subtle manipulation of the hotwife/cuckold couples in this story is brilliant! I love it! Can't wait to see what happens at the bull pen in chapter 4. Great job, best chapter yet!
Try working in with his size stretch her out above her cervix to give her a core orgasm. Clinically the Anterior Fornix.
Great job with the slow and professional sounding seduction, really helps ground this in reality. I like the set up of how Tanya wears them down and bring out their true nature, all while sounding like she is really there to help them.
I say take your time with it, wives getting corrupted is always better when is gradual.
This is all too repetitive for me. I just don’t/can’t care about Ced Brown, I care about Abbie Dawson, Nick and Justin, I think it’s terrible to make us wait for the bullpen for this, knowing the Warden is next makes it worse. You could have continued The Speedo, you had all the different characters to back the main three, sorry but with respect I’m very disappointed it will be a year before you get from the Speedo to the pen. Thanks
Abbie and the wardens wife hotter. They should be priority one followed my Taylor
beautifully written kept you interest wish i was the women in the story
One of the best series I've read on Lit ever. This is the first of your stories I've read, can't wait to check out the others! Five big fucking stars!
Is it really true we are going to get our first glimpse inside the infamous bullpen in chapter 4? I was so hoping you would write that series next, but I love Cuckolds Anonymous and now I'm anxious to not only see Abbie there, but Kacey now to. I hope we don't have to wait long. 5 stars.
I used to think that no one could write an interracial sex scene better than everyonesavoyeur, but after reading the hookup between Ced and Kacey in this chapter, I'm going to have to think again. That was superb! It took me three tries to make it all the way through if you know what I mean! Can't wait for whats next.
Well since my wife and I are ex-lifestyle participants and she's a brunette I'm going with Kacey as being my preferred wife. Even though we spent about a dozen years in the lifestyle we never did find a truly huge man for her. I think her biggest was probably about 8 inches and he was a white guy. Both the black guys she was with, the PNW is pretty pale, were a dissapointment in regards to size and stamina. Looking forward to your remaining chapters as you take these beyond a basic stroke story without thinking you're writing the next great American novel
You were right this was your best yet. It's hard to choose between these two women without seeing them in the flesh , not going to happen , but since breasts is third on my list . A woman's face, eyes nose mouth # 1 ass is #2 breasts # 3 hair color do we ever know for sure , without seeing it all and even then ? Personality means a lot too Both your ladies , and Abbie's ,personalities are what make them so hot . I can't wait to read what's coming now that you've out done your self with this addition , Thanks popuone
I like the way that FifthEstate is weaving this tale, with the couples describing their actions and their innermost thoughts, in retrospect. I'm anxiously awaiting the next installment! BTW, Taylor is my favorite, so far.
I have always wanted to see my wife taking a big black cock. Your writing is keeping me hard during the whole time. I look forward to more writing in the future.
Incredible chapter AGAIN!! To answer your question; I think perhaps Taylor but both females are written so well.
Top marks on a great chapter. I respect the different tones and angles you are creating which are different from the Speedo's series. I think this keeps it fresh.
Anyway well done, looking forward to what's next..
Based on Cedric's excitement for the blonde wife, I can't wait to read about him cramming that monster so far up her pussy, the reggae singer will never cross her BBC muddled mind again!
You've created another masterpiece Fifth. Now you got me hangin on the edge with the bullpen teaser. C'mon man, don't make us wait!
Good chapter as always, if it's written by you, it's gonna be good.
However, I think there something I can add, regarding this chapter.
I perceived a feeling of "dispersion", but I'm sure it's because this one chapter is a prelude to something more intense. Which is good, since character development is essentially what makes a story great. But please, don't introduce too many characters too fastly, just this
It feels like this is the preparation for sumthin good, isn't it?
Anyway, plaese, I'd really like if you made Kacey and Tim the protagonists again
You told us awhile ago that you would finish off the CUCKOLDS story at the rate of 1 a week and then concentrate on WARDEN .That was 3 weeks ago . What is the delay ? Your WARDEN story is a masterpiece ; as I am 74 , please publish soon !!
Enjoy your stories.
Now get back to your room and tell us about the warden!
Bring on the corruption of Taylor. Tim is too agreeable, maybe Josh can try to stop it again but Taylor will tell him she’s not stopping this time
Great writing. Erotica at its best. Slight tongue in cheek humour at times is added attraction.
But let’s get back to the Warden soon :)
This is a great series mate. Really hot. Love the way the characters develop through your stories. I'm sure you base the character descriptions on certain living personality. Would you mind sharing who you have based Kacey and Taylor on? In my mind Kacey is Iga Wyrwał when she was a brunette. Gonna read the next chapter and eagerly await for the series to continue. Oh... I dont want to be nitty picky, on page 5, you refer to Taylor as Kacey... Minor typo.
This just does not carry the fire and angst of the”speedo” story. Maybe its how it all seems chronicled rather than experienced first hand.
Both of course! But if I had to pick just one it would be Taylor. I have a feeling she is a freak in disguise!