All Comments on 'Cuck's Night Out'

by yahek246

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
not that good

Should have been in interracial regardless that you wrote about a wife. It was written for for that then just a cheating wife, hot wife, or even sharing. Too short to really get off the ground. Not much erotic in the house getting ready and then the club was really short - dance once then leave?

I guess you make up for it in part 2 when she eventually cones home.

Delko484848Delko484848over 3 years ago
Your loss

One more lady that is not satisfied with her husband and his performance. Better call a divorce lawyer in the morning.

iameaseliameaselover 3 years ago

Nothing need be said.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

so now she has left time to go home pack your stuff and leave for better pastures you don't need a whore for a wife unless you are a sissy wimp

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Unfinished

Police find her a week later having been raped with a broomstick and covered in her Black man's cum. So another stupid white girl finishes are life.

mattenwmattenwover 3 years ago

... it is now time to go to the divorce lawyer or to make an appointment with the psyco therapist! The first applies to the normal man, the second applies to the perverted insane cuckold!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
excellent

The anticipation of waiting. The total lack of control. The worry. The intense horniness. Wondering just how they are fucking her. All lead to an amazing experience. I can't wait to see if you post another chapter to this. I want to know what happened.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
character development

I fail to understand these writers that fall to lame over used tropes.

Their characters are so flat they fail to even be one dimensional.

There is nobody in the story that readers could cheer for.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Why put it here?

Wrong category. 1*

BuckeyebobBuckeyebobover 3 years ago
If this were a real story.......

My response would be “count your blessings”. See your divorce lawyer. Strip your accounts and buy a ticket for some place warm.

Drop that stupid broad as fast as you can.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Category is OK

As the first page of a story it's not bad. Erotic anticipation is at a good level.

Each reader can comment on the element of reality they feel is lacking for any fictional story, but I liked it overall. My element of skewed reality was the drinking. Though the author didn't describe her body type, at least 9 drinks in a three hour period with no eating seems like she would have been just about comatose. But I get it. Supposed to be liquid courage.

4* .... Now where is this going?

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
Really bad

Really bad ir cuck story. A new author out to troll LW.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More please

What day of the week was it that this happened did you ever come back and make you cook a whole more you become a black man's b**** if you will next time she did she have you come with them there's so much more they can be put in there right now you have as a cliffhanger

iameaseliameaselalmost 3 years ago

Ummm.................

tralan69ertralan69erover 2 years ago

Finish the story.

Thank you for your story and waiting for more.

josebvasjosebvasabout 1 year ago

HOT !! She went away with some black guys I can imaging how she get back home pussy swollen full of bbc cum and she smelling with particular odor from black dudes that hit is hot I would lick all her body Damn

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