All Comments on 'Cuddle-Slut Ch. 02'

its a spectacular sequel. three cheers for bribery!

She's such a wonderful combination of tender innocence, and wantonness... Delicious story, I really hope to see more of these two.

Brilliant follow up; I hope there's more from where it came

Great follow up to the previous story. Both characters are very strong and work well off each other. One of the best parts about this story is that I didn't mind the downtime between sex scenes, I just enjoyed reading about the girls love for each other. Please continue with this series. It has two of your strongest and most likable characters ever.

I agree with anonymous

Hope you continue, first two have been great, great stories so far :)

I loved this one as much as the first chapter .. almost. But frankly, I can't even see any way but down after the perfection of chapter 1. I think it's just the problem with both romance and sequels - after the first big success, you have to work hard to keep it interesting and even if it is better, it's never really quite the same.

Still, you kept true to the first part and delivered a solid 5 in my book. I loved it and I don't doubt I'll enjoy any sequels you might write.

There's a reason I don't write many sequels. Or actually more like a few reasons. One is, as you say, the fact that you have to write something as good or better than the original, or people are gonna be disappointed.

Somehow I still let myself get persuaded to do it sometimes. Glad you liked it anyway.

Cheers

Xarth

Sooooooo good I really hope you make a third

I enjoyed the first chapter very much; as well as the second. This chapter had some good parts I especially liked like the car scene where it turned to exposure, taking risks, which is exactly what should be shown in a third chapter. Eventually a scene at their parents again ;-)

Please write at least another one or two chapter

I hear what your saying, but the chapter has lived up to the first

this has to be my favorite one to date, please please make more chapters

Please make another chapter, and an idea is using a vibrating strap on or a jumping rabbit

wow I love this story so much, its fantastic, best story I have ever read, I just wanted to know what happened with the girl in the sexshop, did you invite her back to yours and have a threesome, kik me racerben

Incredible Amazing Story!! Oh my god I hope there will be more! I don't even want to read anything else!

I fucking LOVE this story!!! Can't wait for part 3!! It's SOOO GOOOD!

This was amazing, as all of your stories are. Just great work, I love reading your publications.

So, i came to this story expecting to find something to get off to, and ended up just reading it as a normal story. The story was well written and had depth. I just wish there was a 3rd part!

I love this story, I really wish there was a part 3 because everything about it is so intoxicating! I love the sister bond and the passion they have for one another. I can see that April is really letting her guard down for her little sister, I can see that they are truly falling in love with each other! Ahh this is beyond amazing!!

You should make a series through aprils point of view id definetely read it great story btw lovedit

I read both the first and second part and loved both of them. I enjoyed every single aspect of these stories! I wouldn't change a thing. I smiled many times throughout at how natural and realistic you made it seem, even incorporating the younger sister getting a job and learning some responsibility. I also love how your incorporated the sexy parts with the mundane things of life like cooking, etc. A really well rounded and complete story. Thank you for writing these. I would not be saddened to read more about these two sisters should the creative urge strike you again. :D

Absolutely love this story to bits. I shed an actual tear at how beautiful their relationship had become. This needs a third part please! It's so cute how April looks after her little sister! Please tell me theres a sequel on the way!

needs parts 3 and 4 - pretty pretty please *pouts*

This is such a great story, one of your best stories I've read so far. Keep it up

I can see the problem with writing sequels. As soon as the relationship has begun there isn't much development left, at least nothing that could make it better. What's left is that creation of a new mini-franchise. Two very good and beloved characters that we learned to love on 8 long pages are hard to leave behind. We want new adventures with them because we grew close as their passive observer. What follows are many small things that'll never reach the intensity of the first story and this is why Xarth usually doesn't write more than one part. I enjoyed it here though since the character of the younger sister wasn't fully grown up yet. But that doesn't always work. The playfull obtrusiveness of her would have had a negative effect if she had been a brother instead. Good choice to make it a lesbian lovestory.

Ok, i'm truly mesmerize,

Could not stop to read until the end,

"fell it like you'd been there(or her)" sensuel, sexual, erotic, strangely disturbed, oddly deep inside, bright hope that,

True love, is blind to all & indifferent of how or whom,yet it conquer all's

I would really love it if you could add more chapters to this story.

This is like some real life elsanna shit. I absolutely loved it. Written beautifully, the humour was great, and they most definitely are in love.

And a wonderful chapter too! Thank you!

I really love this story, probably more than I should.

These sisters have such a loving bond and greet personalitys an looks that I forget about my problems and focus on this amazing series. I'm in a place in my life right now, in where day in and day out I have anxiety and stress, and this story has made my day, best day of the year in fact. I never felt this was about a book or a movie before and I don't think I will ever again.

I'm incredibly sad to see it come to an end and I'm hoping with all my heart that you continue this beautiful series.

Keep up the good work.

..., both Chapters! Adding both to my Favorites List.

'Nuff said.

I'VE READ THIS STORY @ LEAST THREE OR FOUR TIMES. I HOPE THERE'S ANOTHER CHAPTER COMING. IF NOT THANK YOU FOR CHAPTER TWO.

5🌟's. and a dozen roses. 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

Can't wait for more. Please continue this story. It just doesn't feel over yet.

Guys, I hate to say it even more than I'm sure you hate to hear it, but it's been four years. I don't think Cuddle Slut Chapter 3 is happening.

This world needs it! Also, was kinda disappointed there was not much involvement of the butt plug. Some ass play would be the icing on the cake in the next chapter. I have this idea of the little brat giving her sister's ass a lot of attention while April tries to do some cooking wearing her apron. I hope you include that part in there...

I liked how you wove cooking into your story ... stories, cooking, like love-making, slow, deliberate, and something your characters like doing. They are good at it, it's wholesome, and they also get to show off their smexy bodies. Plus there's food at the end of it, and that is something admirable.

I like these two sisters, the little brat and the Até. They love each other and they accept each for who she is, and that's very special. And they're sweet, like eating cookies.

I like eating cookies. Both kinds.

Very well done... there was slight emotional development, but not much which is extremely accurate given the timetable... you didn't make it all ok... there is still slight insecurity and uncertainty... probably less than reality but at least you address it unlike most! SWell done!

You have become one if my favorite authors on here, and this story is precisely why.

Really great interplay of characters and the sexy stuff was very exciting

I appreciate your writing very much. Too many people get straight to the point and don’t care about the quality of their stories. You clearly do, and in the short time I’ve been reading stories on this website, you have become one of my favorite authors. I would like to see this story continue, if you feel like writing more sequels. I’m sure I’m not the only one who would enjoy that, either.

After six years I don't think we'll be getting another sequel, but I do have to say that I very much enjoyed these two stories of the Cuddle-Slut.

Thank you.

I enjoyed both stories and would love to read another sequel to find out how they further their love and sexual experimentation with each other. Well written and definitely a hot story. Thanks gor them and hope to read more.

I would dearly love a sequel... please sir/ma'am, may we have another?

Anal stuff is not my thing at all, but it's a great story, well-written with cute & sharp dialogue. 5*

moooooreee

I liked this one as well!

Joey

Wait, what bribes are needed for us to get more of this story, we NEED more!!!

PLEASE MORE!! I’m SO in love with this series please tell me there’s a ch. 3 on the way!!

Lovely. Well done.

this was awesome maybe you can bring home the adult store girl

There's always at least one dipshit in the bunch. "Yay! Now bring in another girl and ruin a cute little love story between two great characters!"

All and All a good story needs another chapter to it though to have a proper ending and word of wisdom don't listen to the few idiots that think you should bring in another girl all that will do is ruin the story and cause a rift between the sister's only major issue I really seen in either chapter was bringing up a porn shop and the butt plug you saved it which is something most couldn't do but I will be honest you almost killed with those parts next chapter go back to the good Ole fashion lesbian story leave the fake dicks and butt plugs out of it and don't bring any other people into it and you will be just fine

While I have no problem with anal play, it struck me as fairly random. After initially being introduced, it quickly fortgotten and not mentioned again.

That did not hurt the story, but just seemed unnecessary.

Do what you want with your own art and ignore the endless carping from the peanut gallery!

I hope you do more with these two characters.

Need more of this story. Love to know what happens in the future for these two lovers.

Great. Awesome. These two are made to be together. Confused by butt plug.

DON'T add anyone else.

WIting for Ch 3 PLEASE

Okay...what kind of bribe gets us a part 3? I'm good for it, I swear!

It was first rate!

One thing I would love to see in lesbian incest is the characters whether they're sisters or mothers and daughters is to finally get married to each other.

If the relationship is polyamorous whether it involves lesbian incest with other family members or just lesbian love with other women who also have incestuous lesbian members in their families I would love to see all concerned enter into a polygamous marriage.

If you ever decide to continue the Cuddle-Slut story I would love to see them marry in the story and even to have children together.

If the relationship leads to the incestuous lesbians having children together I would love to see them go in for genetic testing to make sure that they don't pass on any genetic defects to their children and I would love it if they were to have sperm grown from their own blood and used to artificially inseminate themselves.

Others are arguing about what should happen next. I don't care what happened next as long as it's something. Please please write a a sequel!!

More please! I love this story.