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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good start

Fun concept could be a really good story if you showed a few more character interactions instead of just telling (ex. the dean finds out and there’s no dialogue present between him and the characters).

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great but

Great but the ending needs some work., it just feels rushed from pinnacle to conclusion in 10 sentences.

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All through school I hated English class and writing stories was painful. Now I am writing stories for pleasure and wished I would have paid attention in class.