Heh, knew how that was going to end. I love you're writing though, the flow is great. It somehow allows things to stay incredibly hot, dirty, and just descriptive enough while moving the scene forward.
My parents came to the United States wanting their children to lead great, successful lives...and then I became an erotica author. Spicy afrolatina here! Exhausted from years of taking my writing too seriously, I tried my hand at erotica with my first story, "Fried Calamari" ...