All Comments on 'Cumming of Age Pt. 03'

Another mean chapter, love your stories

Arohanui Kiwi Fan

I have no idea how you always manage to write such uniquely compelling stories that balance on the knife's edge of being genuinely heartwarming tales of gay experiences and also being consistently incredibly arousing. Great job as ever, Doc.

Please please update!! This is so good

Jack is way too hot to put up with this dumbass sub shit, being humiliated and degraded by name-calling, spitting, slapping, spanking, sir/daddy BS, etc. Kieran and Dan should be besides themselves to have any attention from Jack. Just let them fuck and cut all that other crap out. It’s not hot and Jack is way better than that. The fact that he barely plays by the rules makes it obvious he knows he doesn’t need that shit. Once he learns some control and has a bit of experience he’ll leave those bozos in the dust. I’d have loved to see him punch the shit out of Dan for the fag comment.

Please continue!! (Thanks)

Definitely need more with Jack and Keiran please.

I NEED A PART 4

Lol the person who feels so strongly about Jack. Like “hello! Jack is a work a fiction made up by the author and can do whatever the author likes. Also Jack is 19 with no experience, he could totally love the sub stuff. Gen Z. Fluidity in sex roles

I always wonder if authors read these comments. I like this author and hope he continues to write and post here. Hard core dom/sub stuff is too much for me, especialky the humiliation crap, but this story is just about the right amount except for the spitting. Gross. Really great characters. Well done!

Ha ha hi Calico75. I can’t speak for everyone but I definitely read comments, and thanks for your feedback (on multiple stories!). The eye rolling is a by product of me being an angsty sarcastic teenager and the dialogue has been mentioned probably 3000 times and I’m still working in it. I think at some stage I’ll rewrite the earlier stories because I do think I’ve grown stronger as a writer- but I still throw out the occasional dud. So while you’re working through my back catalogue be assured I definitely hear feedback and I’m aware a lot of things are lacking! I’m still writing: I’m just employed full time and depressed full time and a mild alcoholic full time so it does take time ha ha. I love comments though! Especially the nice ones!

Love this story. Can't wait to read more. Like another commentor, I can do without the spit parts but everything else is awesome. Glad I found this author!

Love all of the stories.

Well fuck, didn't know just how badly I needed a bratty metalhead himbo til I read this story...

Excellent story man, and seriously fuckin A writing - thanks for sharing it here.

Cheers,

full_metal_dragon (still too lazy to login but eh, had to comment)