All Comments on 'Cupid's Arrow'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well done. My thinking is - you have two choices. Start a new story or take her back to reality,put her back in her car, but on the road headed to work, and her meeting. Maybe, a stud drops by that afternoon, and you take it from there. Good grammar and editing. Keep writing.

XYZ

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
bloody fantastic

WOW! Just reading this made me cum and cum, my knickers were soggy by the time i got to the end. Fantastic....

Anonymous
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