All Comments on 'Cupids Bow: Making Ben Angry'

Very well written, truly erotic

I loved the story and the characters!!! Beautiful story! Fantastic job!

...but she had every right to be pissed at him. Watch out for the typos, there's a good many.

A good story that I enjoyed reading. I did notice there wasn't a lot of dialogue.

Loved the fiery love story

Loved the fiery love story

Loved the fiery love story

Loved the fiery love story

Absolutely wonderful. Great story. Nice and hot! Keep writing.

Absolutely hot! Watch that grammar/spelling though.

hot hot hottt! enjoyed reading. so well written that the personalities seem very real! thanks and good luck in contest!

You could use a little more dialogue and definitely need to check for typos next time. But still a really hot read. Good luck with the contest!

I don't normally go for romance stories, but yours was both touching and smoldering. The Melinda character is excellently made, and the surprise at the end (that the ring is on her finger) is truly innovative. Well done!

One of the best I've read in a long time!

I love awakening that caveman instinct in a guy...you did this well!

Ben was a fucking JERK and the pretty girl stupid for allowing him back. HE WILL CHEAT and break her heart...