by hyde2hyde
have not read better stuff outside of Siver moon books. Well done
A fine and exciting story - 5 *s and my thanks; I can hardly wait for the sequel - very well done.
is spoiled by overuse of !exclamation marks! They are unneccessary. Your writing tells us of the excitement.
I reading the story I am sure I did not even notice the exclamation marks I was so into the story. Got me really excted.
Hyde....I hope you are planning to write more about this couple. I'm sure many readers....and I KNOW , for me, we want to read MORE!! The possibilities of where this couple's needs and desires can go, are endless. Please finish this story with 2 or 3,,,or 4 , 5 6 more chapters would be read and appreciated; by your readers.
I didn't notice the exclamation marks for the well written story that didn't just follow the generic pattern for these stories
I really enjoyed the set up and follow through with the story. I loved the fact real world consequences or the potential for them were not ignored or covered up with some contrived, imbecilic blackmail attempt. Instead, she made the decision to walk into whatever they were going to engage in with her eyes open and willingly. Such a breath of fresh air...figuratively speaking.
Just WHEN is the author of this story going to get round to finishing it !
You have a great way of writing and a very mean streak as you've left us, your fans, hanging
We need to know what happens next
More Please!!!