by Buttbud7
The panties was bad enough. Won't read the next if mom is involved. Very hot sex thou.
Hot story man. Would be more interesting if his brother found him rather than mum. But either way, please continue!
That's ok if you or anyone is turned off by the mother part of it! I'm not offended if it's just not for you :) maybe what I'm into is a bit more niche, there's something for everybody on Literotica though! Haha
You're a really good writer, and I love the relationship you're building between Jay and Matt. It's genuinely loving, a meeting of equals willing to learn and grow together while respecting and truly caring for each other. I'm personally not interested in having the mother get involved - but would really like to see you draw Matt's brother and/or cousin into their sexplay.
this is an absolute love story and should be continued . i got all worked up so please keep it going
cool if the mom gets involved, just please keep the m/m stuff going and the cum and creampies flowing
A hot love story would only be tainted by introducing the mom into the mix!
Sorry but I wont be reading any further if it goes that direction! The cliff hanger would have been much more exciting if it had been Corey, or even Patrick instead of mom!!
Bring the twin and the cousin back into the mix for some hot group stuff if you have a need to make this more taboo and incestuous! Twin bothers and male cousins sharing with the new boyfriend could be smoking hot!
The mom idea is a complete turn off for me, sniffing her panties and the straight porn was bad enough for me personally! To each his own!
yeah, was completely taken out by everything to do with moms/mothers ... using their panties & sex toys is g r o s s and a turn off, imo. otherwise a promising story
Wanted to enjoy the story, but the mom stuff... So gross 🤢. Please add a warning at the start for people who want to avoid creepy stuff.
great story. Not into the Mom stuff either but hey to each his own. Some people are into that . Didn't ruin the story. I also would like to see the cousin and brother involved..:)
This was really hot! You could go either way with this but please keep it going.
Great story.. I’d rather her be supportive but not involved but maybe the brother and cousin are.
Please write more even if with the mom I will read and enjoy it.
Very sexy story