by harddrive49
What a fantasy. You have done very well for your first story. I loved it and hope you will keep writing stories as good as this. I really want to know if he knocks up his "golfing" student seeing as she has been trying to get pregnant with hubby.
It is even more impressive that it is your first story. I like the harem type stories, I wonder did the curse also give him increased recuperation? I hope that some day you will continue this wonderful tale.
Way too long, and while this is fantasy, no guy can cum that many times per day.
This excellent drama has real depth of character, and the plot and love scenes are expertly interwoven into a seamless whole. The result is a brilliant story all the more remarkable for being the author's first. Five stars.
What a hot, I mean hot story. Being cursed like that has been nothing but one continuous fuck fest for our main character. Can't wait to see where this goes next. Gets my 5++++++star vote!
Looks like a cheap plot (warlock curses kid with sex) to enable the character to meet someone have sex meet next person have more sex meet next person etc etc etc... no real story to it, just some kiddie version of I wanna be a sex god. I'll scan through the rest to see if there's actually a story to it, but based on pt1, I doubt it.
much too repetitive - same story line with differing folks involved and you did the exact same
Cum only when I allow it in a previous story