by Southern_sass
I like it a lot. Kinda sucks where you stopped it. Def interested in the rest.
.. but BEFORE you go any further, you need to give a good explanation ( a - very - good) explanation of how he thinks for one moment that the boss will not give him his cards after this.
You already screwed up one paint job now you want to screw on the same paint job, That's fucked up man that is no way to treat a CORVETTE!!!!!!!!
It is hard to give a constructive criticism to an unfinished story. All I can say is it's a good start to a story.
To paraphrase the old saying, "The porn ain't over till the horny lady screams!"
Yeah, give it to the bitch and in her ass if she complains.
Good start but will only get better.
Why would anybody stop in the middle of a sex-scene? That was not fair. You can definately write, but it felt like being dropped mid-coitus by a indecisive ex-boyfriend.