by MonoXidesToXicViXen
I like sexy young things that are horny and romantically inclined.
It's difficult to come up with a fresh approach to an erotic story. Hell, it's almost impossible. But, while your story isn't all that fresh, it does ring true, as in it really did happen that way, and I for one appreciate it.
The stories pace is good, characters have a certain definition, and that counts for a great deal. I certainly hope you write more, regardless of the topic, although I do prefer erotica. LOL in that I too write it and welcome the pleasant company of other writers, especially, talented ones. I will be looking forward to reading more of your work.
Regards,
Paris
nice to know that somethings haven't changed over the years....long live teenaged hormones!