by missvicky53
that gets even better with each new chapter! Please keep on writing about this incredible relationship and don't listen to the critics - they're a dime a dozen anyway!
Thank you! 5 *s!
Mistress Megan holds all the cards and her sissy slave's consent is hardly an issue. At times She talks the talk (example: he has no choice, etc., etc.) but when she "walks the walk", it doesn't seem like She's really done her homework. Either that or she is taking it very slowly for his sake... not sure which. I like this story and it's written very well..... but I guess I'm wondering a little what her lack of experience in this matter will eventually lead to.
4 stars.
I am loving all 3 stories so far.I feel this is so great.Wish this was happening to me,TWOSPERITS
..he never noticed all the work going on in the guest room, and the lock being put on the door?
Who drew the hot bath that so magically appeared?
And a "light lunch" in the "late afternoon"? WTF?
I have some major questions in regard to whether she loves the guy or not. she hasn't uttered a single word in that respect, apon which, the guy was surely to take notice. he would, or is, realizing the situation will get worse for his future, fantasy or not.
The best I can say is that the English is fluent. But Megan talks like a cross between Princess Margaret and Heidi Fleiss. And in addition to the inconsistencies pointed out by the previous commenter, which I also noticed, the panty-gag seems to appear and disappear a bit too easily.