All Comments on 'Cynara 02: The First Telling'

An exciting continuation. Superbly descriptive and arousing as ever.

Thank you so much, Cleeve xx

You have grown beyond a mere writer, into something so much more. Your story telling is amazing.

This is the best story, of yours, that I have ever seen. Well done!

S

Pixie, I was drawn in immediately and held captive throughout. Your description pulled me into the world of Sara and Makeda right along their sides. There was love, enjoyment, exploration and a crescendo like no other. A story to behold for days when anyone needs a smile.

Bravo Pixie, Bravo 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

It seems to me that there is a new maturity to your writing, Pixie; the early paragraphs in this second part are almost poetical and it was a pleasure to read them. If this story is to relate a journey of love through the ages, I very much look forward to further chapters.

Thank you so much Bobbi - I so appreciate that xxxxx

Thank you so much, Stewart xxxxx

Thank you, darling Aoife xxxxx

Thank you, Maonaigh, that is music to my ears. I have struggled with health of late, so it's good to be back writing and I hope there is more to come xxxx

This was pure poetry. A beautiful love story told in oh! so different and clever a way. I am glad to read that your health is improving, Pixie. I will wait with patience for the next installment of this beautiful saga. It goes without saying that I award it 5 stars.

Thank you so much Olwen - what a lovely thing to say xxxxx

This story feels like a dream, evoking memories from earlier stories for me, especially the Rahab series.

But one thing is new: Sara's initiation. Other than previous protagonists who always started by giving pleasure and often waited long for reciprocation, she receives pleasure first, from a princess no less.

I hope that dream also extends to the reality of your life, Darling Pixie.

W

Classic erotica, and yet, avant-garde. It’s one thing to read a story, but another to experience it. Pixiehoff establishes such a powerful connection between the reader and the characters in her stories that a dimension is breached and everyone is immediately involved in the sights, sounds, smells, and feelings / emotions. Sara and Makeda, / Rowan and Cynara are captivating. More of this otherworldly coupling please. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

Thank you darling Wolfie - I am so glad that you like this - and yes, the shift it betokens is meant xxxxxx

Thank you so much, Anonymous - and I am so glad that you and others like what I am trying to do here xxxxx

Not “as though” for this reader as well. Very creative.

Thank you so much, Migbird, good to have you back commenting xxxxx

This tale in particular stirs something deep within. Having some familiarity with the characters now makes it compelling and real - even though it is an ephemeral telling the fantasy for me seems to be real.

Thank you so much, Willow xxxxx

A commitment for ages, like sara and makeda’s, yes in a blink of a second yes ….. nothing more special nothing more powerful the a soulmate ….. wonderful Lady Pixiehoff , this is truly some part of your heart and soul …… thank you to share it

💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝✨🌹

Thank you Franziska xxxx

So lovely; I am ashamed that I am so ill-educated that these lovely souls are completely foreign to me, but now they are lovely friends and so beautifully written, my darling, as always. So much joy and passion. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 ❤️😍

Thank you so much, Mama S xxxx

Brilliant, An Embedded Narrative!

Hallo Pixie!

Wow, this is a beautifully written, hot and sexy story... Queen Jackie and I can't wait to read chapter 3,,, yes!

Oh by the way... Is there any chance the Lesbian Sisterhood of Amazon Warriors... The stout and brave Stumpy and the beautiful Bella, or the Female Barbarian Warriors, will rise again, or maybe comeback in another story? 🙂

Thank-You, 5-Stars and 5-Dreamy Orgasms..

The Black Queen and Gay Kat! xxx

This story humbles me, and makes me proud to represent such eternal love.

thank you mu darling Gaykat xxxxxxx - and there will be more on Bella and co soon xxx

Rowan, my darling, what can I say except this is us xxxxxxx