All Comments on 'Cynthia'

Your best yet!

Well told story!

Boyd Percy

Perfection extrapolated. 5********

It was a tough read for me in the beginning but by the end I thought it was so good.

A beautiful journey well told. Thoroughly enjoyed.

Thank you

Well done.

doing real things during the course of a life, and then winding up with a developing relationship that acknowledges what happened before.

Excellent story.

People do grow and change - at least the worthwhile ones do. It may be a little overdone in this story, but why not these two? It's nice to see two rogues come back to a good place and do it together. Sometimes the gods do smile on people. Thanks for a good read. 5*

This is a great story about two imperfect people who finally find a perfect relationship. Well done!

Overcritical gave 5*. Next up for our author is the Pulitzer Prize in literature.

And I’m surprised he/she didn’t complain about predictability as usual. Must be getting soft.

I just recently discovered your work and I'm enjoying your stories very much. Accept for some grammar mistakes, the content of the stories are excellent. Cynthia is one of your best. Keep um coming.

As usual this was another great story, but it was short. It was good to read, and I enjoyed it. I just like the stories that have three or more captures. Then I can get involved in how the story builds up. With all of the twist and turns of the correctors involved.

The writing is adequate or better, I suppose. The MC isn't some kind of hero or a really good guy. Yet I am not one who believes that a conniving slutty bitch can reform. Sure it is wrong that she was beat upon and injured... But, in real life, it is hard to believe that someone hadn't done that to her when she was younger and screwing around on and with a bunch of people. 3 stars is all I can award this stretch of my imagination.