All Comments on 'Cynthia's Sissies Pt. 01'

Could be interesting, will have to see how it goes. It could stand perking up a bit in the story details.

Different story line. Have me thinking what might cum next. Chapter two please.

I have finished the story. It's a 13 chapter story with a lot of really hot ideas (and a really hot ending). The moderators accepted part 1, but rejected all the other stories...

I think that maybe the story is a bit convoluted and amateurishly written (It's my first time doing erotic fiction), so if anyone wants to have a look at what I've written, I will happily send you the other 12 stories

I love it and wish there really was something like this, and I would really love to be given it by a girlfriend without my knowledge.