by Antidarius
The only thing wrong with chapter was its brevity. The story continues to gain complexity and unexpected twists. Please don't make us wait another 3.5 months for the next instalment.
Man this story is so fucking good. I can’t wait for the next installment!
Just starting reading the other day, couldn't put it down. Very well done!!! Anxious for more!!
This story is very well written and i love the general concept. However the manipulation by the Companie (especially Debbie) has me furious. We have a lovable MC who has never known the feeling of someone desiring him and his first experience with love is with a manipulative, two-faced b*tch. If Jake was real and found out she was sent by the company... idk, people have commited suicide for less... I realy want to enjoy this story but everytime Debbie comes up it gets really hard to do so.
Sex, no sex it didn't matter. The story, the characters, they mattered. Please, more.
So sad that this has just been left. Its a great story and it has much more capacity to grow than most. What is this company with this incredible technology? What are they trying to achieve? Who was the mystery woman? How can Jake continue to grow without turning his loves into acolytes?
Fantastic series, though it's been left open. I hope you will continue with more chapters.