by cburton
In some of my more... devious moments, I crave something like this with my own father, though nothing's ever going to come of it. Fantasies should stay fantasies for a reason. Still, it's nice to imagine...
This was a great series. My only issue is it needs to be better edited for consistency in the grammar/case/point of view. It would make for an easier read and a much more excellently crafted work.
The series feel real and the finale is stunningly hot and perfect!!!
(There are some minor grammar errors that probably wasn't the author's fault but the site's... still worth re-editing)
Kudos to the Author!!