All Comments on 'Dad Loves Feet, Lindsay Loves Money'

by QuietNightFantasy

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cageysea9725cageysea9725about 2 years ago

Who is Angela?

That's one example of many illustrating either your laziness or ignorance. It doesn't really matter which; both have the same result of a poorly written submission.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

........Feet...... Why feet? Sure, it's some peoples fetish, but at least put that on the cover, as some people find feet repulsive (like myself) 3 stars. It would have been a good story if they had actually FUCKED, and it it was about something other than feet. Though that's just my opinion. Some people like feet, just make sure they actually do something erotic before it closes

FrankysstoneFrankysstoneabout 2 years ago

One of the best Stories!

LoveofTabooLoveofTabooabout 2 years ago

A good setup for sure: a daughter has her dad enthralled by her beauty and sexual energy and she uses him for money (while also, hopefully, enjoys the sexual acts).

It was sad to see you didn't actually have them have sex. Is there going to be a sequel or is this it?

I think if this had been where she had enthralled him and they actually had sex it would've been more erotic with her controlling him. (I gotta admit and say I have such a story in mind, but it's up to you what you do with this.)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Absolutely amazing story. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Father’s Surrender into the hottest sex paypig sex addict

QuietNightFantasyQuietNightFantasyabout 2 years agoAuthor

If you don't like feet why would you read the story? It's literally part of the title. I may do a part 2 with intercourse, this story was a commission and the request was for only foot play, no sex.

And yea cagey, I fucked that up. Appreciate the criticism

RetroFanRetroFanabout 2 years ago

I really enjoyed your story and rate it highly. I also have fun writing about spoiled girls and foot fetishes. Please write more stories about spoiled girls manipulating men with their fetishes to get what they want.

dongkong1985dongkong1985about 2 years ago

you are a good writer, i enjoyed the story.

aurelietraveaurelietraveabout 2 years ago

very good !

i hopr theere will be more to come...

Subone1Subone1about 2 years ago

Great story - thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

More of this please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I loved it,oh I was so jealous of Brian

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

My daughter, in her twenties, worked professionally and lived at home. She often wore just pantyhose and ran around the house that way. She drove me crazy. She had grown into a beautiful mature woman. She has gorgeous 40D breasts. I often saw her pussy hair mashed flat against her abdomen by her sheer pantyhose and her pussy lips just as described in this story. She kept me hard all the time, and she knew it, and she loved that she could do that to me. She finally had mercy and jacked me off frequently while letting me feel her wet pussy through the pantyhose. Her pussy smell was so erotic. We finally went much further.

Paypig666Paypig666almost 2 years ago

The fear of being a financial sub crumbles from the need and lust for that powerful paygasm. Great hot story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Purrrrfect

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

More, please!

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