All Comments on 'Daddy, Am I A Werewolf?'

It's probably not fair to criticize the frantic pace of this story, since it IS for a contest. But it just seems to cry out for a more leisurely pace. The idea of the full moon overpowering her is a great one, and developing it over time would really increase the erotic tension. Maybe she could realize how out of control she's getting when she masturbates in the library, or by herself in a movie theater. Sorry if I'm coming across bossy; I just think that a more developed version of this story could be pretty spectacular

I agree with diggypop. I also liked the story but, it was a little bit rushed up. Still, good luck for contest.

All that's missing is the narrator's voice-over at the end (or maybe at the beginning). "You have entered another dimension...a dimension of sight and sound...you have entered the "Twilight Zone!"

sucky story, sucky plot, sucky writing. youre all over the place. learn to write. it didnt make sense.

I thought that this story was great. I am very horny now. I wish there were more stories like this . I love the ending.

That was awful.

Fun story, very different premises.

interesting consept but badly written, too rushed and all over the place

I like this

I LOVE IT!!!! BEST STORY EVER!! Hairy, hirsute horny Megan!! Body hair growth cumming back so quickly!! Omg 😲 💜 💦