by jara_jacobus
So little bitch Daria invades the privacy of others in their home....she wasn't called into the study!!!
It’s not nice to get the story going full speed and then turn it off. Nice writing style
The story was really nice I loved it I was so wet from reading this but you should have finished the story better or at least did a chapter 2 other than that the story was great
I enjoyed your story very much. The only change which would have allowed me to enjoy it more would be for it to have been longer and more drawn out. That builds tension and is a good thing.
I noticed its been a while since you posted anything, I do hope you write some more soon :)
Nice start! The promise of, at least, a sequel, really gets the juices flowing! Will it be a three-way, or, just, giving the daughter a show?! We're waiting, even now, with anticipation!
would like to read what happens with Daria, Mara, and Mara's dad.